Shy away from qwik clot granules, they need to be irritated out of the wound. Celox powder or celox A would be better, and some impregnated gauze would be better still. Combat sponges are good for large open wounds, but suck for packing in GSW/ penetrating trauma. For bandages I like the olaes much better than the Israeli/ emergency trauma dressing. I FAR prefer the SOFT-T tourniquet over the CAT. The SOFT is simpler and has a metal windlass opposed to the plastic on the CAT. You'll want an occlusive dressing for open chest/neck wounds. Lots of z pack gauze, kerlix/ cling, 6X6's/sponges, Ace bandages etc. Super glue works well, but I find it's better if you put steri strips over it.
I have a few different kits. It all depends on your need, as form follows function. For my fighting kits I have mostly blowout kits. 2ea flat rolls of duct tape wrapped around them. 1 ea 4 inch Olaes bandage (contains occlusive dressing and z-pack gauze), hemostatic agent and an additional z-pack gauze. Some kits have 3 1/2" 14 ga angiocath for needle decompressions and cricothiroidectomy's. Eta I forgot to list nasal airway and tourniquet.
My home kit has misc wound care items, the stuff I listed above, dermabond (medical glue) steri-strips, sutures nasal and oral airways, tourniquets, benadryl & pepsid for allergic reactions, epipens etc.
Might want to mention that unless you have a medical cert to stick someone, you'd be better off trashing the angiocath. I don't know of anyone I'd trust to stick me and I damn sure wouldn't stick anyone else. That's a good way to go to jail. If they're having brething problems, you can always burp the occlusive dressing to relieve tension pneumothorax. Unless you're more than 20-30 minutes from a Level 1 trauma center, the odds of needing to do a needle decompression are pretty low.
I'd add to your kit some tampons for plugging GSW, a hands free headlamp for working in low light (or a couple of chem sticks), a Sharpie for marking medical information and pair of EMT shears, or at least a seatbelt cutter like the one made by Benchmade. Otherwise your kit sounds pretty well thought out.